The Legacy

[ive already written this intro down in a topic but i didnt know we had a story thing so im addin it on to my story thing.here we go.]

THE LEGACY

A long time ago,three families made a covenant.All of which were given this power of immortality.The three families agreed to these terms.A few years after the covenant was passed and one of the three family members grew tired of just immortality.The one was known as Numega.In his greed and lust for power he killed off the first family of Yu Yevon.Then he went after the third family of Lord Zaon.He failed and Lord Zaon went into hiding.A thousand years had passed and a new generation of the covenant had been born.Though,Numega was still out there looking for Lord Zaons descendents,to gain full power,and cover the world in darkness.

[so?what do you think?]

its ok its a little u know....... but its ok

i didnt ask for your half criticizm.

I rather liked it.

fine its good then

thank you.but it will only get better.

Pretty dang cool

i know.like i said if you like the intro then youll likwe the rest of the story.

hey mal.um if im typing the first part and say im not totally finished and have to get off,what do i do to keep my data that i already have?

its cool
are you the new generation because i am one of the sons of yevon that was kept secret. oh what

yeah the descendents are Valcarion,Taichi Ci and Laney.this is all part of my book.im posting it all on this website.its gonna rock.

well i am one that none knew about.till i reveal my power on the battle feild you know on war continued

hey brian.dont rp in this story.its not an rp.

im not im just saying so you know more bout my character

ok.ive got it.in the battle when were both surrounded by a lot of enemys,we form together and become one person.sounds cool to me.

i think it's good! good job

Chp. 1

Valcarion sat up on the hill as he looked down at the valley watching his brother and sister playing together.Valcarion gave a smile to his last siblings.A thought struck his mind.He thought back to the day he lost his mother in a tidal wave in the sea on their voyage home.All he could hear in his mind was screaming and hearing his moms vioce as she was takin by the sea.He seemed what dizzy and felt as he was about to pass out.He felt a hand on his shoulder and looked up finding his fathe,Ariman,staring at him asking if he was ok.Valcarion jumped to his feet."Yeah.Im fine."Ariman-"Come on.Were going home.It looks like its gonna rain."Valcarion-"Alright.Taichi Ci!Layney!Come on!!Were going home!"The two raced to Valcarion and started walking up the path.They got home and Valcarion plopped down in the bed.He gave a grunt and closed his eyes.He was half asleep when his little sister,Layney,ran in and jumped on him.Valcarion looked up and saw two big eyes and pink hair."Well hello there.Ya have fun in the meadow?"Layney-"Yup."Valcarion-"Tommorow we'll get up early before dad gets up,and ill take ya to the waterfall so you can see the moon crystals before they will away from the moonlight."Layney-"Cool!"Valcarion-"Go get ready for bed."Layney-"Ok."Valcarion rubbed his stomach and got up and walked outside.He looked at the sky as the rained hit his face.Taichi Ci walked beside him."Some rain huh?"Valcarion-"Yeah....some rain."Taichi Ci-"Whats troubling you?"Valcarion-"I had a flashback of the day mom died."Taichi Ci-"Oh.It was a long time ago.You need to move on with your life.In time we'll see her again."Valcarion-"Yeah i know.But it will be a long time from now.I dont think i can wait that long."Ariman-"Come on you two.Get back inside.Dont want ya gettin sick."Valcarion and Taichi Ci together-"Alright."

end of Chp. 1

[what did ya think of chp. 1?later it'll have more fighting scenes and battles,but be patient.hey mal im gonna use some of your chars in this story.is that alright?]

(Sounds cool. And yeah, who did you have in mind? PS Please don't kill them lol)

maybe isolde and well maybe all of your chars.and no i wont kill them.....yet.jk lol

Ok that's cool. lol if you use them, make em cool

i will.i may let isolde get hurt once in the story though.

thats kool with me

alrighty then.ill start on the next chp. when i have more time and then ill have it where i meet isolde and veronica.

coolness

coolnes?gosh you come up with the craziest words.well,so do i but that a different thing.